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Feb 26, 2011

Your words of love

 I am seemingly missing your words of love,
those words that were written on the sand
and erased by the first wave.
Do you remember, my love?
I have enclosed them hermetically
with that last kiss.
And, after that,
another kiss
and another exotic beach
and another feeling, autumnal feeling,
of another ostensible seemingly love
fulfilled my nothingness...
Among corals and shells,
dried by the winds of the sea,
I awake in following my lost steps,
taken by the waves
and redirected to the great unknown in the sea,
that great eternal.....
I still love you
I love you more, miss you more
yes, I still miss you.
And i realize that all I can do now
is to lodge near the moan of the sea sand,
which feels like a silk slipped worn-out dress
when I touch it.
And slantingly I elect the oblivion
when
I want to kiss again and again
your gray-haired temple
but, in reverting I receive only
the kiss of our child...

22 comments :

Marieta Maglas said...

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Ray Seymour (2/15/2011 12:18:00 PM)

I really liked this poem. A lot. All but the last two lines, which come on too hard; and, if I were you, I'd soften them - for the sake of not spoiling the mood.
Mohd. Akmal Nazir (2/7/2011 2:16:00 AM)

Wonderful poem. A voice of every heart and a gem for the lovers.
I couldn't help loving the poem for its fragile emotions and vivid imagery.
Great write.
Fayssal Chafaki (10/19/2010 4:00:00 PM)

Poetic, Marieta! You took us through an adventure.
Liz Williams (9/9/2010 9:10:00 AM)

gorgeous. if i could give it eleven i would.
Ibrar Siddiqi (9/3/2010 2:17:00 PM)

Marieta - a beautiful poem - as everyone has felt - love is like the sea - tkaes you to new shores, swim with different fish from the School of Life and it can fdorwn you, consume you.

Thi spoem made me feel sad as i wished i met my wife when i was younger, i felt like a well worn sailor who visted too many ports - to have read your poem has made me reinforce my love for my soulamte and wife

Thanks


Ibrar Siddiqi
veronique buea pre (8/25/2010 10:51:00 AM)

i loved this poem very much its remember me how much i love my bf i let go of him cuz i love him so marvellous words of love which is there forever in heart :)
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (7/21/2010 9:13:00 AM)

Romantic kiss finally culminated in ‘Our Kids’…jilt yet not split romance …wow! Swaying poetry … thanks for sharing
Ms. Nivedita
UK
10/10
Rohit Sharma - - Working on my book (6/24/2010 5:36:00 PM)

Emotions pouring down from every word of your poem..Great Writing...
Ebn Zaiat (5/28/2010 3:07:00 PM)

...And i realize that all I can do now
is to lodge near the moan of the sea sand,
which feels like a silk slipped worn-out dress
when I touch it... Beautifully done -solid poetry
Hafsa Ali (5/6/2010 4:05:00 PM)

wow very good
moving

Marieta Maglas said...

....why me ....Eyan Desir (3/14/2010 4:00:00 PM)

Your words of love
interesting and well express
Wrapping Prose (3/10/2010 2:17:00 AM)

A touching piece. Well-expressed.10
Somahadi Hadi (1/19/2010 6:31:00 PM)

Love is honestly
Love is willingness struggle
Love isnot Hypocrite and
Love isnot betraying.


My opinion Your poem is ' The Greatest Poem '.
Vinod Kumar (1/9/2010 10:15:00 AM)

A clear picture of live used the black white and red, red is the colour of genuine, it mincled with the autumn nature of green, the grey is also essential, thanks for sharing 10+
Marieta Maglas (1/6/2010 3:12:00 PM)

From: Randy Winehouse (South Africa ;)
To: Marieta Maglas
Date Time: 1/6/2010 2: 34: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)


Subject: your words of love


Wonderful poem; beautiful and sad. Very emotional.

Randy
Mehta hasmukh amathalal (12/30/2009 7:36:00 PM)

I still love you
I love you more, miss you more
yes, I still miss you.
And i realize that all I can do now
is to lodge near the moan of the sea sand,
which feels like a silk slipped worn-out dress.....................what an spell binding expression from poetess. every one sometimes may come across. i lovveditspresentation....10

read minegrandma at 89...... survival....i miss
Oyekake Satty JOSHUA (12/26/2009 7:56:00 AM)

I love it; thank you!

'I awake in following my lost steps,
taken by the waves
and redirected to the great unknown in the sea,
that great eternal.....'
Marieta Maglas (12/22/2009 2:33:00 PM)

From: Mike Keys (New Zealand ;)
To: Marieta Maglas
Date Time: 12/22/2009 1: 42: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)


Subject: about your words of love


this poem is amazing and touches my heart

Mike
Marieta Maglas (12/21/2009 10:58:00 AM)

From: Robin Keaton (New Zealand ;)
To: Marieta Maglas
Date Time: 12/21/2009 10: 28: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)


Subject: your words of love


Beautiful, poignant, it touched me..........

Robin
John Knight (12/18/2009 8:40:00 AM)

Hi Mari - Thanks for a lovely Love Poem. Thos eof us who have had some experience of life can all enter into the sentiments of this lovely poem. Love can be transient and if we drift apart (we would never do that!) our words get washed away - The taste of our sweet kisses dissapear and it all becomes a memory. 'I awake in following my lost steps - taken by the waves'. However the feeling of love still goes on 'I still lov e you more miss you more' We all reach out to the memory of love - which often eludes us. 'I want to kiss you again and again ............I receive only the kiss of our child. Love you in Poetry - JOHN X

Marieta Maglas said...

Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner (12/16/2009 12:07:00 PM)

This is among the wonderful love poems i've ever read..: -) and Mari, you're awesome.
Inner Projection (12/14/2009 10:40:00 PM)

nice work! love the imagery.
Mehmet Alagoz (12/6/2009 3:29:00 PM)

a very nice poem. its like a walk in dream to read your poem
Charles Lynwood (12/4/2009 8:14:00 AM)

A tender romantic poem with a meaningful end
10
Marc-daniel Paul (12/2/2009 2:34:00 PM)

This poem digs deeply into the described love..........and the structure of the writing is perfectly built. You are truly a natural and make sure you know, your poem doesn't simply express the inside inspiration you owned when you wrote this piece, it also projected this inspiring mood into others in which i am one as well. I love it, keep writing.....
Nouri Black (11/21/2009 9:20:00 AM)

wooow, the thing that make me crazy about ur poem, is that u mention the sea and wave and the sand, am crazy about beach i feel like its the best place to write poem, and ur words its really soft and amzing great job
Kranthi Pothineni (11/12/2009 3:57:00 AM)

Few images you painted in this write are so expressive and moved the heart from the deep. Beautiful.
Eileen Davidson (11/10/2009 10:41:00 AM)

I still miss you in context is very powerful in this poem
10
Ravi Sathasivam (11/9/2009 10:34:00 PM)

Beautiful expressions
An exquisite poem
Written in deep thoughts
Enjoyed reading it
10+
Cyrina Moon (11/4/2009 8:44:00 PM)

Like the timelessness flow of the piece. Your metaphors are interesting and done with some measure of humor. They appear suddenly and catches this reader from a different mood and perspective and redirects with aplomb.

Marieta Maglas said...

Naseer Ahmed Nasir (11/4/2009 2:39:00 PM)

Marieta, I have no hesitation to say that there are deep feelings of love like the sea in this poem, supplemented by some beautiful images.
Regards

Naseer
Edward Parsley (11/4/2009 9:56:00 AM)

a beautiful piece of work, written in deep thoughts, lines flows freely
10
Marieta Maglas (11/3/2009 3:08:00 PM)

From: Dick Badian (Netherlands ;)
To: Marieta Maglas
Date Time: 11/2/2009 6: 52: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)


Subject: Re: forever yours


hello Marietta.
I promise i will get deeper in your work.
I sniffed arround.saw some beautifull pieces.so as soon as i can find more time I will dive into your thoughts.

kind regards

stuiterdick
Margaret Donaghy (10/30/2009 1:24:00 PM)

Full of romantic love... and the end a product of that love
10
Myrtle Thomas (10/29/2009 8:19:00 PM)

So romantic and yet sorrowful as if the sea has swallowed up your lover., Beautifully penned.
Alf Hutchison (10/29/2009 3:24:00 PM)

Hello Marieta... all I can say is that I wish someone would write a poem like this to me... I am a great romantic and LOVED it... Regards Alf
Punsara Amarasinghe (10/28/2009 2:51:00 AM)

Dear Maglas........I have been inspired by your vivatious poetical ability.....its glorius..........Even your language is tooo profound and vivid........you are real modern poet..........keep up your imaginations.........it will encircle you and us...
Moonbee Canady (10/26/2009 4:37:00 PM)

I Put This One In My Favorites... Truly Lovely Poem... (And I Love The Sea Poems... I Lost Some Of Mine and haven't had the heart to write anymore for awhile... so I enjoy reading other Poets, Seaside poetry... This Was A Good One... Took A Person Right To The Beach... MoonBee
Siddartha Montik (10/26/2009 1:52:00 PM)

truely looks like an amazing life story!

so wonderful walking along those beaches of life.. and trying to feel the feelings one would go thru! .. ending with a gift of child..but still remembering!

thank you Marieta - I give it 10++++++++++++++++!
Roxane Sarandon (10/25/2009 11:54:00 AM)

wow this is too good! ! such eloquent words! ! really cute! ! ! so much elegance! ! .10

Marieta Maglas said...

Margaret Purslow (10/25/2009 12:40:00 AM)

WOW! ! ! What a beautiful poem, truly remarkable! 10/10
Dorota Szumilas (10/24/2009 9:34:00 AM)

Word of true love are nice and beautiful. Miss and love and words... poetical words...
Edward Reed (10/23/2009 11:10:00 AM)

a nice blend of emotions and feelings.
10
Lumvouris Webb (10/21/2009 7:20:00 AM)

beautiful word with an even flow......10++
Marieta Maglas (10/20/2009 2:28:00 PM)

From: Dona Lil Antonio (Manila Philippines; Female; 29)
To: Marieta Maglas
Date Time: 10/19/2009 12: 19: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)


Subject: hi


ive gone through your poems they were all awesome and written in deep feelings.
keep writing and keep inspiring others to make good crafts as well.
Asma Khan (10/19/2009 4:39:00 PM)

Very nicely written poem with good words and smooth flow.
Marieta Maglas (10/18/2009 3:55:00 PM)

Date & Time: 10/18/2009 9: 43: 00 AM


Poem: 18296939 - +Your words of love+++
Member: Chris Gardner

Comment: beautiful.......10+
Marieta Maglas (10/18/2009 9:56:00 AM)

From: Alan Draper (Braunton, Devon United Kingdom; Male; 54)
To: Marieta Maglas
Date Time: 10/18/2009 9: 17: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)


Subject: Thanks Mari


I've read your poems. You have good imagination but the poems are too serious for me. Maybe thats the way in Romania. It does have a sad reputation to us Westerners. I love laughing and challenge you to write a funny poem to make me happy. Lots of luck from your Froggie friend Alan
Chris Gardner (10/18/2009 9:43:00 AM)

beautiful....... 10+
Luke Stanley Owen (10/17/2009 7:28:00 AM)

I like the sentances that said
with that last kiss.
and i love you more miss you more
and after that anther kiss.

from luke

Marieta Maglas said...

Luke Stanley Owen (10/17/2009 7:28:00 AM)

I like the sentances that said
with that last kiss.
and i love you more miss you more
and after that anther kiss.

from luke
Cindy Kreiner Sera (10/14/2009 8:55:00 AM)

Poignant, so touching to read - brings emotions to the fore - Beautifully expressed - Cindy
Ali Aaj (10/9/2009 3:45:00 PM)

nice images and touching scenes, good experience of art.
Gwenda Madison (10/9/2009 12:40:00 PM)

How could you move on when his image is with you all the time. This is the life and true story of many women.....10
Jessica Hoffman (10/9/2009 11:46:00 AM)

A touching poem! a token of love! .................
Jennifer Kaleigh (10/9/2009 11:31:00 AM)

Really it is a beautiful poem.Very touching, indeed..........10
John Mcmanus (10/5/2009 5:15:00 PM)

This is a very well crafted poem, with excellent prose throughout, keep up the good work,10.
T Dub (10/2/2009 1:25:00 PM)

Wonderful poem; beautiful and sad. Very emotional...loved it! !
Agnes Parker (10/2/2009 7:17:00 AM)

wow this is too good! ! such eloquent words! ! really cute! ! ! .............
marvin brato (10/1/2009 11:26:00 PM)

Meaningful expressions
a poignant romantic notes
reminiscing the loved one
indulging in the moments
ever cherished with a lover
this is one exquisite poem
always find a place in the heart.

Marieta Maglas said...

Farbin Luna (10/1/2009 8:06:00 PM)

this is very beautiful poem, i love the beginning very good flow
it shows a lots of passion definitely 10+++
Aarif Ameen (9/30/2009 8:42:00 PM)

good work
good luck
10+
Abigail Roscoe (9/30/2009 1:07:00 PM)

Beautiful, poignant, it touched me..........
Marieta Maglas (9/30/2009 9:00:00 AM)

From: Nishit Kalavadia (India ;)
To: Marieta Maglas
Date Time: 9/27/2009 12: 02: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)


Subject: DEAR................................................................................................................................


TREMENDOUS EFFORTS TO WRITE POEMS YOUR POEMS ARE THE BEST ONE
Marieta Maglas (9/30/2009 8:55:00 AM)

From: Divabhi 3103 (. India; Male; 20)
To: Marieta Maglas
Date Time: 9/28/2009 11: 42: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)


Subject: Re: Re: hi


I commented and rated your poems. excellent poems.
Marieta Maglas (9/30/2009 8:51:00 AM)

From: Ramin Chaman (Tehran Iran (Islamic Republic of) : Male; 37)
To: Marieta Maglas
Date Time: 9/26/2009 3: 44: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)


Subject: Re: hello


Hi mari

You know that a image is a picture in words.
I think your poems are the poetic image and full of limpid words.


Ramin
Marieta Maglas (9/30/2009 8:48:00 AM)

From: Gregory Fiandach (Costa Mesa United States; Male; 48)
To: Marieta Maglas
Date Time: 9/29/2009 10: 17: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)


Subject: Your Poetry


Very Impressive. Check out some of my music on myspace.com/gregoryfiandach
Villager Gulabo (9/30/2009 4:31:00 AM)

this poem really takes us to a lovly world.....

this is true love...
Nolan Trenton (9/29/2009 3:15:00 PM)

This poem touches deep things and draws us into a wonderful, sad yet deeply satisfying experience - true love.............10
Obinna Eruchie (9/29/2009 9:29:00 AM)

How romantic are '+Your words of love+++' especially these opening lines, 'I am seemingly missing your words of love, / those words that were written on the sand/ and erased by the first wave./ Do you remember, my love? / I have enclosed them hermetically
with that last kiss...'

Marieta Maglas said...

Ravi Sathasivam (9/26/2009 11:42:00 PM)

Very touching poem.
Lots of emotion is shown here
Beautifully written.
True love never ends
Enjoyed reading it
Ramsey Lynwood (9/26/2009 1:13:00 PM)

great flow of emotions, nice poem..........
Seema Chowdhury (9/25/2009 8:11:00 AM)

wow very nice and lovely poem.
its full of nostalgic memories and moments.
a lot to feel from these words.

pl see some of my poems too.
Jeremy Peyton (9/23/2009 5:53:00 AM)

Really it is a beautiful poem.Very touching........................10
Keith Chapman (9/23/2009 5:33:00 AM)

Absolutely poignant! Nice write..................
Kesav Easwaran (9/20/2009 12:41:00 AM)

strong passion and love feelings...very eloquently expressed Marieta...good write...10
Noel Horlanda (9/18/2009 1:00:00 AM)

each line, each verse is well taken care of, each word so delicately chosen to give a mixture of feeling of pity, sadness and happiness from an innocent youth. Such an inspiring piece...cheers
Anand Madhukar (9/15/2009 10:15:00 AM)

A beautifully worded poem, heartfelt and touching.
Milica Franchi de Luri (9/14/2009 9:35:00 PM)

Marieta this poem is so passionate, so loving it made my hair stand up reading the last verse.
....why me ....Eyan Desir (9/13/2009 5:45:00 AM)

Nice poem
with a touch of a woman 10s

Marieta Maglas said...

Rosalinda Martinez (9/11/2009 11:40:00 AM)

wow, your poem holds my breath in awe! thanks for sharing. i love your words of love. thanks again.
Adriana C (9/11/2009 7:52:00 AM)

This poem brought tears in my eyes...
Daisy Calder (9/8/2009 12:16:00 PM)

The words are impeccable! ! ! ..........10
Amir Foroughi (9/6/2009 3:18:00 PM)

Good poem.flowing of childish sensations.
Kainwo Moses (9/3/2009 3:51:00 PM)

Mesmerised? That is the magic of love! You will keep missing those words that rose above those sweet kisses. But must you bide by the sea forever? You are richly blessed because the sea shells speak love better-that's my experience dear.
Asma Khan (9/2/2009 8:07:00 AM)

Very touchy poem like while reading we get absorbed in it. I guess you deserve 10/10.
Nikunj Sharma (9/2/2009 1:35:00 AM)

the words and the love

is definitely not on sand

for they were etched in gold

in a manner grand...

to gleam and glisten in the sun

to be heard and listened to, with lot of fun

for years and years to come...

to stand the test of time

just like a sweet sounding chime.....

10 from me too
Beauty Philosophy (8/30/2009 3:23:00 PM)

A very touching piece conveying true feelings...
Rehana Nazli (8/30/2009 11:56:00 AM)

those words that were written on the sand
and erased by the first wave.

It is starnge although the waves erased the words, but the image has lasted for life....thats what I call a moment of love is moment for life!

A beautiful memory which surely is mixed with sadness too.. thanks Marie.
Rafique Farooqi (8/30/2009 10:15:00 AM)

Very beautiful and touching to my heart.......water ran over the words written and I remained alone on the seashore

Marieta Maglas said...

palas kumar ray (8/29/2009 1:54:00 AM)

Very poignant write.Every word bears the images of lost moments.Very touching.
Santhi Krishnan (8/26/2009 10:37:00 AM)

simple sweet and cute....went streight to heart
Corleto Delos Santos (8/23/2009 6:14:00 AM)

whoa! such a great poem! il give you a rate of 10 that even waves won't make it dissapear!
Peter Percy (8/22/2009 2:52:00 PM)

This poem send me a message and add me as a friend...great poem......10
Ty Colbert (8/22/2009 6:10:00 AM)

I really enjoyed this poem, when i read the words i felt like i was in the story. it was great! 10 from me
Sergio Bruno (8/20/2009 6:32:00 PM)

Very touching, a portrayal of true love.......10
Marieta Maglas (8/20/2009 6:15:00 PM)

From : Atreya Sarma Uppaluri (Secunderabad India; Male; 62)
To : Marieta Maglas
Date Time : 7/19/2009 4: 48: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)


Subject : Hello, friend! Your 'Your Words Of Love'

Dear friend, I've just now read your 'Your Words of Love' and found it enjoyable. Henceforth, I will be going through your creations as often as possible. I've included you in My Friends list; and I would be glad if you could find some time to go through my poems and rate and evaluate them. Warmest regards.
Marieta Maglas (8/20/2009 6:08:00 PM)

From : Jacqui Thewless (Pembroke United Kingdom; Female; 54)
To : Marieta Maglas
Date Time : 7/29/2009 8: 51: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)


Subject : Wordsof Love

I really liked this poem. A lot. All but the last two lines, which come on too hard; and, if I were you, I'd soften them - for the sake of not spoiling the mood.
All the best,
Jacqui
Marieta Maglas (8/20/2009 6:02:00 PM)

From : Emri Trainor (Fountain, Colorado United States; Female; 10)
To : Marieta Maglas
Date Time : 8/5/2009 8: 35: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)


Subject : I read your poem Words Of Love

I read your poem and i really liked it, I gave it a 10!
Marieta Maglas (8/20/2009 5:54:00 PM)

From : Suxanne Popp (Enumclaw United States; Female; 63)
To : Marieta Maglas
Date Time : 8/10/2009 4: 42: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)


Subject : your poem about the sea

loved the image of the silk dress. Sensual and stimulating imagery. Read 5 of your poems. Suxanne

Marieta Maglas said...

Lola Habas (8/20/2009 3:26:00 PM)

Easy to comprehend, a very mature expression..........10+++++
Ivan Kodorkovski (8/20/2009 3:14:00 PM)

wonderful words of love, lovely poem............
Jason Garraway (8/18/2009 3:32:00 PM)

Very nice poem....truely sweet
Frank Lambert (8/16/2009 9:37:00 AM)

Hi Marieta,

Sulaiman directed me to your poetry, I'm pleased he did.

This verse is silky smooth and holds so much meaning between the lines that I'll have to read it a few more times to truly appreciate.

Thnaks for sharing, Frank
Sikta Anurakta (8/16/2009 7:19:00 AM)

Heart-touching till core! ! !
Marieta Maglas (8/15/2009 3:18:00 PM)

From : Enitan Onikoyi (London United Kingdom; Female; 57)
To : Marieta Maglas
Date Time : 8/15/2009 2: 25: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)




Marieta,
I have read your peoms and the write ups are very good. Obviously you are very talented. Keep up the good work.

Take care,
Enitan Onikoyi
Sakthi Ravichandran (8/14/2009 11:25:00 PM)

I want to kiss again and again
your gray-haired temple
but, in reverting I receive only
the kiss of our child.

Excellent lines given with love to readers I like it and love it very much 10+++
saktheee S Ravichandran
Joe Sandefur (8/13/2009 7:27:00 PM)

this poem is amazing and touches my heart i say 20 out ten that cant be beat
Siddharth Singh (8/12/2009 1:32:00 PM)

An exotic beach created with
the words of the poet.
Incredible, really.
Voted 10.
Marieta Maglas (8/10/2009 5:37:00 PM)

From : Suxanne Popp (Enumclaw United States; Female; 63)
To : Marieta Maglas
Date Time : 8/10/2009 4: 42: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)


Subject : your poem about the sea

loved the image of the silk dress. Sensual and stimulating imagery. Read 5 of your poems. Suxanne

Marieta Maglas said...

Jameel Ahmed Ansari (8/9/2009 1:23:00 PM)

wow this is too good! ! such eloquent words! ! really cute! ! ! so much elegance! ! keep it up
Melvin Banggollay (8/6/2009 12:12:00 AM)

truly sweet and poetic. thanks for sharing
Noel Horlanda (8/5/2009 10:00:00 PM)

This is a beautiful piece of work, written in deep thoughts, lines flows freely, really a great love poem.
Marieta Maglas (8/5/2009 11:48:00 AM)

From : Emri Trainor (Fountain, Colorado United States; Female; 10)
To : Marieta Maglas
Date Time : 8/5/2009 8: 35: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)


Subject : I read your poem Words Of Love

I read your poem and i really liked it, I gave it a 10!
Rajaram Ramachandran (8/5/2009 11:15:00 AM)

A poem that provokes intense love to anyone reading it.
Ioana Trica (8/5/2009 6:06:00 AM)

Great poem, indeed. This is so beautiful! 10/ 10
Thank you, Marieta
Beauty Philosophy (8/5/2009 5:48:00 AM)

A touching poem! a token of love! Real love doen't wither...
Enitan Onikoyi (8/4/2009 9:27:00 PM)

'I want to kiss again.............but in reverting, I received only the kiss of our child. It makes me sad that your love is gone but left you with a child of his. How could you move on when his image is with you all the time. This is the life and true story of many women.
Afzal Shauq (8/3/2009 8:15:00 AM)

Among corals and shells,
dried by the winds of the sea,
I awake in following my lost steps,
taken by the waves
and redirected to the great unknown in the sea,
that great eternal.....
I still love you

your poem and its expression shows that you are still in deep love with him, .. the one whom you talk to..because the depth of your love is prving from the sweet verses of your great poem..its done perfectly and the way you done is poetic and melodic and very much meaningful... I really liked it and inspired from your loving depth to him and let me say that you are a good poetess indeed and you have great comand on making good poems being a professional poet... well done 10/10
Tim Walter (8/2/2009 10:08:00 AM)

a poignant and touching poem...............

Marieta Maglas said...

Tina Wilson (8/2/2009 9:59:00 AM)

great romantic poem, thank you for sharing.....
Buscador Del Palabra (8/2/2009 9:21:00 AM)

Among corals and shells,
dried by the winds of the sea,
I awake in following my lost steps,
taken by the waves

what an image! ... Del
Midifo Yearns (8/2/2009 2:02:00 AM)

This poem touches deep things and draws us into a wonderful, sad yet deeply satisfying experience - true love. The child brings fruitfulness. True love is never ending. Thank you Marieta.
Sana Rose (8/1/2009 3:52:00 PM)

The words are impeccable! ! !
You are! !
Rhonda Moody (8/1/2009 3:27:00 PM)

Full of romantic love... and the end a product of that love.. Very nice..
Shahzada Imtiaz Ali (8/1/2009 11:12:00 AM)

o, i guess! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
you are a perfect thinker and artist.
good job.
write more, be happy with your love.
Subbaraman N V (8/1/2009 2:58:00 AM)

Absolutely poignant! Nice write,
June Feir-Cruz (7/31/2009 10:49:00 PM)

Beautiful, poignant, it touched me. Thank you for this lovely poem. Bravo! !
Nael Shami (7/31/2009 1:15:00 PM)

It's a very romantic poem...
I can see that you are deeply in love...
Coleen Laney (7/30/2009 12:12:00 PM)

a very romantic poem and a love full of refinement

Marieta Maglas said...

Barbara Smith (7/30/2009 12:00:00 PM)

hourglass sand and words written on sand and love which is not forgetting.........I love it!
Agnes Courtney (7/30/2009 11:49:00 AM)

this poem is seemingly written for a love that is eternal and that would defy the time.The poem has a particularly lyricism.
Adrianne Colton (7/30/2009 11:38:00 AM)

great flow of emotions, nice poem..........
Marieta Maglas (7/30/2009 3:58:00 AM)

On both sides of the broken wall is the same way to love.. as a baron and a count.. or as Ludwig van Beethoven with his ''Fur Elise'' and Franz Liszt with his '' Dream of love ''
Jesse Tampa (7/29/2009 3:45:00 PM)

I too have written my love into any surface I please, amongst the snow and the sand, my love has seen my Southern and Northern land.
real dream (7/29/2009 9:33:00 AM)

the poetry is transparent by charm of love........nice poem
first rose (7/29/2009 9:21:00 AM)

I like your style of describing love, seems so real........
Jacqui Thewless (7/29/2009 8:49:00 AM)

Most of this poem is very lovely indeed!
Marieta Maglas (7/29/2009 8:43:00 AM)

From : Rachel Ann Butler. Love poems, life poems (Bury St Edmunds Ireland; Female; 89)
To : Marieta Maglas
Date Time : 7/29/2009 8: 23: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)


Subject : Your words of love

Marieta,

I think you left me with alots of questions which is how I like to feel after I read a well penned poem, well laid out emotions.I will be back, a fan!

Best

RAB
Dagmara Anna (7/28/2009 7:47:00 PM)

Good written and nice poem. Greetings.DA

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Sayz LFlynn (7/28/2009 3:39:00 PM)

beautfully writen,10+++
Maitreyee Joshi (7/28/2009 2:05:00 AM)

great flow of emotions.and a very poignant feel.10++
Sakthi Ravichandran (7/28/2009 12:17:00 AM)

I want to kiss again and again
your gray-haired temple
but, in reverting I receive only
the kiss of our child..
Nice poem to read excellent lines i quoted here for a reference
10+++
Farbin Luna (7/27/2009 4:54:00 PM)

touching poem, nice.
Marieta Maglas (7/27/2009 9:10:00 AM)

it was in top 500 poems, Obed, and it will be again.
Laurel Larison (7/27/2009 8:15:00 AM)

wonderfully expressed. Loved this one. laurel
Braja K Sarkar (7/27/2009 7:39:00 AM)

Really it is a beautiful poem.Very touching, indeed
Prince Obed de la Cruz (7/27/2009 6:54:00 AM)

This poem is worthy to be in the top 500 poems!
Jinina Fuchima Rubisu (7/24/2009 10:24:00 PM)

your a good poet...
****TaMaRa HaNaRinG.****** A ThOuGhT MaTe (7/24/2009 5:14:00 PM)

beautiful warm poem..loved it's ending..touchingly said

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Yelena M. (7/24/2009 1:29:00 PM)

'And i realize that all I can do now
is to lodge near the moan of the sea sand,
which feels like a silk slipped worn-out dress
when I touch it...'
I just adore your imagery, pure love is always associated with sea landcapes and scenes for me..Beautiful.
A.
Kelsey Harshaw (7/23/2009 1:02:00 PM)

Very Beautiful! The words could have never been so expressed! And the setting is at a beach and makes me feel like Im at a beach! The energy is so strong in your words! .....Showing your true feelings! :)
Samuel Katz (7/23/2009 12:29:00 PM)

'And slantingly I elect the oblivion '

Really beautifull. I like the fact that you chose the setting of your poem to be a beach, a place most oftenly associated with everlasting love. Yet you emphasize the uncertainty even in that setting, from the sand to the corals. The imagery cuts at our very expectation of love showing us the true feeling of dissapointment you sense.
Nikunj Sharma (7/23/2009 4:00:00 AM)

love like energy cant be destroyed, it just takes another form.....lovely poem...Pls read my poem called MY LIFE, MY WIFE
Nikunj Sharma (7/23/2009 3:59:00 AM)

love like energy cant be destroyed, it just takes another form.....lovely poem...Pls read my poem called MY LIFE, MY WIFE
Afzal Shauq (7/22/2009 1:00:00 PM)

above all that much receiving love from your friend..you again wants to be loved..means you believe in endless love and its the fair way in love to be done in couples..like the way you wrote this rich and romantic poem... lovey idea and heartfelt effects... appreciate your composition of words... well done 10/10

like these lines much...

when
I want to kiss again and again
your gray-haired temple
but, in reverting I receive only
the kiss of our child...
Angelica Ayman (7/22/2009 9:53:00 AM)

i love the way that you descripe your feelings
i like that one
well written 10+++
angelica
Shashendra Amalshan (7/22/2009 12:01:00 AM)

yeah very touching indeed.. I loved this write.. i mean any one who reads this poem will fall in love with you ma'am.. this is wonderful indeed....

with lots of loves
shan
Ronald Doku (7/21/2009 1:37:00 PM)

touching love poem. truely an excellent read
Deborah Cromer (7/21/2009 6:59:00 AM)

Great work. The ending really hit me. This is good. The turn and twist of an unexpected ending is always a good thing. Well written. I enjoyed the feelings from the beach too. I love the ocean. Deborah Cromer

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Mehta hasmukh amathalal (7/20/2009 11:05:00 AM)

am seemingly missing your words of love,
those words that were written on the sand
i love u andmiss u more thatni love u.....whatininspirational poem for youngr ones....10


read mine.... prayer.. go back and yes to to
_____________________________________ - (7/20/2009 7:20:00 AM)

and another exotic beach
and another feeling, autumnal feeling,
of another ostensible seemingly love
fulfilled my nothingness...

eulogy of absence....
Marieta Maglas (7/20/2009 6:12:00 AM)

From : Swatimalya Chattopadhyay (Kolka India; Female; 51)
To : Marieta Maglas
Date Time : 7/12/2009 8: 13: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)


Subject : Re: Re: woes of a working woman

Dear Marieta,

I just have no words to comment on your 'Your words of love'.It is marvellous.I posted my comments and wish to see it again in the best poetries'list.

I had read your +10-10=0 earlier and had posted my comments.
My husband who though is not a member of this site, but who I believe has much more knowledge depth than me was very much impressed by your +10-10=0.

Regards

Swatimalya
Marta Mehrpouyan (7/19/2009 5:57:00 PM)

A beautiful poem... heartfelt and sensual. Thank you for your comment on my poem: -) Be well
AtreyaSarma Uppaluri (7/19/2009 4:39:00 PM)

A tender romantic poem with a meaningful end. A perfect 10.
Kesav Easwaran (7/19/2009 11:10:00 AM)

A moving poem Mari...sentiments and grief overflowing in your lines there...the loss seems to sink sea deep in your mind...thanks for this good piece 10
Shweta Advani (7/19/2009 6:44:00 AM)

nice poem.... love is beautifully expressed.in ur poem...keep it up: -)
Marieta Maglas (7/18/2009 4:12:00 PM)

It is my real story, Manuel...
Obed Souza (7/18/2009 10:59:00 AM)

Wonderful display of emotions.
Nice doing!
Yoonoos Peerbocus (7/17/2009 6:40:00 AM)

a nice blend of emotions and feelings

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Manuel Odeny (7/17/2009 6:10:00 AM)

Wow Marieta, the poem is touching i love the narration and the emotions created by the love gone by the wave. You lulled here:

'I am seemingly missing your words of love,
those words that were written on the sand
and erased by the first wave.'

Great work.
Anirudh Singh (7/17/2009 5:56:00 AM)

Wow, that was really something. Excellent narration, and a nice yarn spun out in poem form. Do keep it up.
Teigan Klippel (7/17/2009 5:42:00 AM)

A rather breath taking poem, Your truly gifted. I loved it
Intan Rianda (7/17/2009 5:37:00 AM)

Great poem!
i like the way you show your feeling in that words!
thanks for reading my new poem.
I hope you enjoy my other poems, too!
Jahmari Thomas (7/16/2009 2:44:00 PM)

i love your poem send me a message and add me as a friend i hope u will read my future
Ritty Patnaik (7/16/2009 11:57:00 AM)

love, written on sand can be temporary, and gets washed off, yet the line it draws on the heart stays forever.it is a beautifull poem marieta! wont mind reading it over and over again.
Broken Heart (i love u more then anything..) (7/16/2009 4:51:00 AM)

its such a sweet poem! ! 10++
Otteri selvakumar (7/16/2009 2:49:00 AM)

nice writing...too touching my heart...
Marieta Maglas (7/15/2009 2:04:00 PM)

Dear Djinnga, the fulfilled feeling of love is the most valuable in this world.It is special and eternal.Thank you very much
Raj Nandy (7/15/2009 6:45:00 AM)

This is a touching poem of tender feelings of love! 10!
-Raj Nandy

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Djinnga Fairbairn (7/14/2009 1:21:00 PM)

Dear Marieta I can feel what you must have felt when you were writing this poem....in that you have produced a star! ! Well done...
Patrick A. Martin (7/13/2009 11:08:00 PM)

Thank you Marieta no wonder I'm a big fan you know exactly where the feelings dwell and your words go straight to the heart - TTTTTTTTTTT10
Ken E Hall (7/13/2009 4:12:00 AM)

Great poem embossed with lost love which still seeems to burn in the heart
I still miss you in context is very powerful in this poem, sadly but gladly a
prize at the end++++++++10 thnks for the read
regards
Kee Thampi (7/13/2009 12:49:00 AM)

and erased by the first wave.
Do you remember, my love?
I have enclosed them hermetically
with that last kiss.
And, after that,
another kiss
and another exotic beach
and another feeling, autumnal feeling,
of another ostensible seemingly love
fulfilled my nothingness...
word filled with love of excellent words in love
Fay Slimm (7/12/2009 1:56:00 PM)

Love lost is the most painful of things to write Marieta and you write love so tenderly - - final lines are most moving.....10 + ++ Fay
Brishti Mazumdar (7/12/2009 9:47:00 AM)

I want to kiss again and again
your gray-haired temple
but, in reverting I receive only
the kiss of our child...


Marieta...Oh! ...wonderful......
No way...I must offer.....10+++++++++++++++
Swatimalya Chattopadhyay (7/12/2009 8:05:00 AM)

Fantastic.So well thought, comes from deep inside of the heart.Lucid, easy to comprehend again a very mature expression.10++++++.
Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (7/12/2009 6:56:00 AM)

a very emotional write...the ending was superb..a pain of a loss never ends..it turns bitter sweet...we will all meet up someday
Rajaram Ramachandran (7/12/2009 1:40:00 AM)

The love for the child at the end is more than any other kind of love-This is beautifully composed.
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (7/12/2009 12:48:00 AM)

Well, well, lovely flow of convincing words for someone you've loved.It ends with a bang!

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Hebert Logerie Sr. (7/11/2009 10:13:00 PM)

The kiss of our child was the only words of love that remained
after all.This poem has a lot of powerful emotions.
Patrick A. Martin (7/11/2009 8:57:00 PM)

ahh! ! love and lost Marieta I'm afraid to ask what the first wave might have been.
love your words and will just keep reading you over and over.
~ Jon London ~ (7/11/2009 7:37:00 PM)

Beutiful work....rich in poetic verse and imagery.....the emotion within these heart written lines...just melt the heart......stunning infact 10++++
Naseer Ahmed Nasir (7/11/2009 11:11:00 AM)

I awake in following my lost steps,
taken by the waves
and redirected to the great unknown in the sea,
that great eternal.....

These lines are deep and full of poetry. Longing for eternal love
wrapped in ethereal cloche of words...Beautiful poem, Merieta......10/10.
Ruth Walters (7/11/2009 11:07:00 AM)

So touching, a portrayal of true love.

Ruthy
Yoonoos Peerbocus (7/11/2009 10:58:00 AM)

[sorry for lateness] interesting piece penned with zest
Adi Cox (7/11/2009 10:18:00 AM)

There is a feeling of loss when reading this poem. The footsteps on the beach washed away from the day before is a powerful representation of loss. How do we see things that are not there? 10/10 for a poem that gives a powerful image of something not there.
....why me ....Eyan Desir (7/11/2009 9:12:00 AM)

Very nice poem.........10s
Sarwar Chowdhury (7/11/2009 4:44:00 AM)

wonderful words of love! .......10+
Hazem Al Jaber (7/10/2009 11:57:00 PM)

words of love..
its the most what we feel when we are in love and when we keep a real love to whom we love..
so deep amazing love that which your pen penned through your sweet pure heart..
yes i stil do remember..
10+++
hazem al..

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (7/10/2009 10:45:00 PM)

a very emotional write with a lot of depth...words flow naturally
Shashendra Amalshan (7/10/2009 3:20:00 PM)

hey this is a beautiful write indeed..
your feelings are well expressed indeed..liked it very much..

with lots of love
shan
Saadat Tahir (7/10/2009 11:59:00 AM)

can i really better what nora has stamped...NO
yes it asks a wow...

very very nice
enjoyed it.....romance with a tinge of melancholy is always a potent mix..
well done
cheers
N Olmedo (7/10/2009 11:55:00 AM)

Wow, Marieta. What a touching loving nostalgic amazing poem. You portrayed feelings on it so well, i felt them as i read. Its sad and beautiful at the same time. Very well done my friend and thank you so very much for sharing :)
Mehta hasmukh amathalal (7/10/2009 11:52:00 AM)

want to kiss again and again
your gray-haired temple
but, in reverting I receive only
the kiss of our child...
may be the last sign of love that will offer the kiss, , , beautiful concept and touvhing poem..10
Mamta Agarwal (7/10/2009 11:40:00 AM)

I am so overwhelmed by your poetic expression of love, nostalgia, feeling of emptiness and heart wrenchong closing lines, expressed through beautiful images.10


Mamta
Obinna Eruchie (7/10/2009 10:31:00 AM)

'Your words of love' dreamy like the cool waves by the beach.
Nizamettin Esen Haymanali (7/9/2009 8:35:00 PM)

'Words of love'. Warm and mellifluous, they are melting in mouths and ears.10.
Meggie Gultiano (7/9/2009 8:22:00 AM)

a passionate write. This is a deep and emotional piece.Lovely
surya . (7/9/2009 5:48:00 AM)

a beautiful and intense poem, i like the last para
'I want to kiss again and again
your gray-haired temple
but, in reverting I receive only
the kiss of our child... '
voted10
surya

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Montolivo Andrea (7/9/2009 4:22:00 AM)

I think that the poet is, remembering something from the past, a love that is close to perfection, a love that could have ended in another way.But you could achive perfection only with love and love is the only thing that could help us realise that life has no sense without it.
Kranthi Pothineni (7/9/2009 12:57:00 AM)

Very beautiful way of expression and feel. These below lines are really good

And i realize that all I can do now
is to lodge near the moan of sea sand,
which feels like a silk slipped worn-out dress
when I touch it.

Very nice write to ponder.
Ency Bearis (7/8/2009 11:57:00 AM)

an emotional yearning of love from soul mate revealed...a soliloquy in poetic craftmanship...well penned....10

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